So I already failed this chapter. "Too many writers seem to assume the quotation marks, by themselves, can transform a grunt into a great fugure," (65). I didn't assume this, but I just did it in my on-the-spot story. I didn't have time to get good quotes so I picked them up really fast and inserted them like the quote that directly follows the quote I pulled out above.
Many of my quotes, I should paraphrase.