Rawr, Rawr, Goes the Dinosaur in Dinosaur Valley

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I like writing.

I like writing a lot.

I like writing like Dr. Suess.

Dr. Suess is an awesome writer.

Watch me write.

Read my handwriting.

It is obvious that I do not have the best penmanship.

However, good penmanship is not the most telling and defining characteristic of a good writer.

A good writer can also be defined as the creative person in the room.


I like writing. I like writing a lot. I like writing like Dr. Suess. Dr. Suess is an awesome writer. Watch me write. Read my handwriting. It is obvious that I do not have the best penmanship. However, good penmanship is not the most telling and defining characteristic of a good writer. A good writer can also be defined as the creative person in the room. And creativity is my middle name. So is Dr. Suess.


The red writing is where other people took over. Despite the difference in sentence length, I think the story worked really well together. As sentences, each of them work and link together. The end sentence is a bit different than the starting conversation, but it doesn't kill the tone/mood of the paragraph. In fact, I believe it completes it.

I didn't really have to do any editing aside from adding an ending sentence.


Good work, partners! (This has turned into a Western flick.)

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