My Stream of Consciousness is shallow.

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Here's my attempt at blank verse!  I am quite proud of it.  It is in stream of consciousness so in a weird way, I'm multi-tasking!

 

You want to know what's on my mind? 

 

Here lies the problem.  I am quite angry.

The poetry that's enjoyable t'me

Is NOT this kind for I like mine to rhyme!

The beat is good.  It sounds very pretty,

but I just feel like something is missing!

And now, am I only half way finished?

So now what I will do is talk T.V.

Jeff Corwin is a great educator.

Watch Animal Planet regularly,

learn and laugh for Corwin is quite funny! 

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To pack your feelings into blank verse lines
Is useful practice. Yes, the beat is good,
And with it we can organize our thoughts.

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