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16, 2005

DeChantal Hall Revised News Article

I am real glad that I attended the workshop today. I was able to cut down from a first draft of 662 words to a revised draft of I think like 485 words. News writing is difficult, and I found that out with this exercise. I have learned a lot though through the revision process. I have done my spot news on the DeChantal Hall opening. It was also a good experience to get out and interview people face to face. I still have a lot to work on and develop, like the difference between news writing and literature writing. The workshop this morning helped me a lot though. So here is my first story.
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Posted by AshleyWelker at 16, 2005 02:58

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Leslie did a really good paper I feel. She uses the right quotations, and seemed to cut out some things, while still having an effective news story. Please check out http://blogs.setonhill.edu/LeslieRodriguez/010740.html

Posted by: Jason Pugh at 26, 2005 11:09

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