Paper 2 Revision

Rescheduled from last week.

Update, 17 Nov: In order to evaluate your revision properly, I am asking to see:

1) your rough drafts (including the comments I made on your papers),

2) a highlighted copy of your new draft.

3) a submission note (explaining your changes and reflecting on your accomplishments)

By "highlighted copy" I mean a fresh printout of your latest draft, with all the changes highlighted -- one color for edits and minor changes (spelling, punctuation, grammar), another color for major changes (introducing a new source, reorganizing a paragraph, etc).