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February 25, 2006

Blank Verse

Ex 1-4c: A Clever Blank-Verse Entry on Your Blog (10pts) -- Jerz: Intro to Literary Study (EL150)

Title: I'll Forget

And you just walk away. Not looking back
The words "I need you" are not being said
I recognize I can't let you go now
I have a sense I can not find in me

For only you can find it inside me
I'm ever swiftly moving; no let go
I'm yearning to be near you at this time
However, I know I can't be with you

Believing in you was so hopeless
And why did I get myself into this?
A bad situation dealing with love
Now I feel I have nothing left to give

Forgetting you is not easy to do
But I'll forget to tell you "I love you"

Posted by ElyseBranam at February 25, 2006 03:25 PM

Comments

To blog your broken heart's a giant step
To healing it again. We live and learn,
And wisdom comes with ev'ry battle scar.

Posted by: Dennis G. Jerz at February 25, 2006 04:20 PM

I know how you are feeling right now.
Two weeks have passed by... feels like yesterday.
Please do not frown it will get better.
The light will shine where we will see it glow.

Posted by: Danielle Meyer at February 26, 2006 03:51 PM

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