March 09, 2004

Flash Fiction

Ok Well I finally read and understood what flash Fiction is about! Also, with help from Jay :) My main problem was I didn't know that it was supposed to be a Ok so here's my first attempt at Flash fiction!

She woke up with the telepohone ringing.
She picked it up and her the Leiutenant's voice saying, "Mrs. Parker, I'm sorry."
The next day she started making funeral arrangements but couldn't bring herself to it. All she could think, "Her son wasn't here, He chose A life in the Army."

Posted by GinaBurgese at March 9, 2004 03:15 PM

You might be giving us too much info--if that is possible in a flash fic. Try paring it down even more.

Don't tell us that a lieutenant said it...just give the dialogue.

Show us as much as you can.

Posted by: Amanda at March 9, 2004 05:39 PM