Beware of Tone
Tone can make or break a story. Tone is something to be really careful with while writing because it can put off a reader if it is something unpleasant. This chapter did a good job at explaining what tone is and how to properly use it. I think it should of also warned writers about how to control the tone as well.
I also think this chapter did a good job, but this book is starting to get slightly repetitive. Blah. However, I probably should focus on the use of tone a little more because when I think about it, I really don't know how to use it properly.
I think it was kind of repetitive too. I don't know how to quite use tone properly, but only because its hard to make tone work well. Its a hard thing to master for writers like us.