Giving Addresses, Protecting Names
The breaking news story was obviously much shorter and had less information than the second. One of the main purposes seemed to be to seek potential leads on the “would-be-robber.” The article both reports what happened and asks that if anyone knows anything about what happened that they tell the police. It was also apparent that the author did not have as much time to write or proofread the article, notice the double “the” in the following sentence: “State police said the man sprayed Mr. O'Neil with pepper spray and attempted to grab the the deposit bags.” This isn’t that grievous of an error and the rest of the article is well written, but it’s just little things like this that make the time-limits evident.
The court story was much longer, had a lot more detail, and included quotes. One thing I noticed that I found rather strange was that the reporter included the addresses of all of the accused. I personally as a reporter don’t think I would do that. Maybe, this is just common practice for news articles, but it doesn’t seem very nice to do that to anyone involved. Another very notable sentence was, “The Tribune-Review does not name alleged victims of sexual assault.” First, they set this sentence apart all by itself in its own paragraph which really made it jump out. Secondly, the girl that was kidnapped was 17, meaning that as a minor her name couldn’t have been published anyway. I don’t know why they just didn’t say that. It’s almost like the reporter is trying to brag about how considerate and respectful the paper is.