What follows is a fisking of one of the New York Times’ obligatory Sunday Catholic Church articles. These articles typically feature priests who molest small boys and the upcoming death of John Paul II.
New York Times
Pope Appoints 31 Cardinals to Group That Will Name Successor
By Frank Bruni
VATICAN CITY, Sept. 28 — Pope John Paul II announced the selection of 31 new cardinals today, a move that significantly deepened his already profound influence over the elite group of Roman Catholic leaders who will choose his successor.
[He’s the Pope. I’m not shocked that he has a “profound influence” to Roman Catholic leaders.]
[Who are these officials? Do they have names, or will they continue to have no indentity throughout this “news” article? Meanwhile, the Pope “seizing” anything makes an elderly ailing priest sound rather power-hungry]
[The Pope has also had one of the longest terms of any pope – 25 years. It’s no surprise that he’s had to replace a whole pile of cardinals that, in 25 years, had grown to be older than 80.]
"When the next pope is elected, we're going to see a lot more continuity than we are going to see change in policy," said the Rev. Thomas J. Reese, an American Jesuit and the author of "Inside the Vatican," a book about its culture and politics.
[Yes, this exposes the papacy as an institution that has an agenda, and wants to see it accomplished.]
[However, I could not be a pope. I am a girl.]
[Gee, to have a new group of religious that may want to care for the poor, continue a dialogue with other faiths, respect life, and maintain the patriarchal system that’s been running the show for 1500 years.]
[We must allude to molestation; this is an article about Catholic priests.]
It included only six Italians, a group whose numbers and influence in the College of Cardinals has seemingly diminished during the reign of John Paul, who is Polish. His election in 1978 marked the end of more than four centuries of Italian popes.
[The author seems to be surprised that a universal church should be represented by a diversity of cardinals.]
He did not give the name of the 31st cardinal-to-be, holding that man's identity, "in pectore," or close to the heart. That has happened many times before, and usually signals that the man is in a country where Roman Catholics are oppressed.
During his papacy, the fourth longest in the history of the church, John Paul has selected new cardinals about every three years.
[Here the author admits that the pope has been pope for a long time, and thusly could’ve racked up quite an amount of cardinal appointments.]
[Has the drama been elevated by this article?],/blockquote>
As recently as a month ago, some Vatican officials said they did not expect any new cardinals to be named until January of next year. As recently as a week ago, there were no reports or rumors to the contrary.But over the last few days, said a senior a Vatican official, it became clear that the pope was seriously considering — and that his aides were vigorously debating — whether he should name new cardinals now.
[So says a nameless official. Is it same official as before?]
"There was concern about the pope's physical state," said the official, who spoke on the condition of anonymity.
[A nameless person reports the opinions of other nameless people, all critiquing the physical condition of someone the journalist presumably didn’t interview for this story.]
On Wednesday, John Paul skipped his usual weekly appearance before an audience at the Vatican. That was one of several unexpected changes to his schedule recently that Vatican officials vaguely attributed to his health and the advice of physicians.The pope suffers from Parkinson's disease and severe arthritis, among other ailments.
But there was also a logistical rationale for naming new cardinals now, so that a consistory — the gilded ceremony at which the newly minted cardinals receive their signature red hats — could be held next month.
[Ah ha! Is this a possible explanation for naming new cardinals? And gee, it’s buried so far down in this story. Clearly a dying pope is more seductive than a “signature red hat” ceremony and minimizing travel plans.]Cardinals from around the world attend such consistories, and the cardinals are already scheduled to be here in late October for events surrounding the pope's 25th anniversary.[Overall, I’m very disappointed in this article. It takes a news item and covers it up with anticipation of someone’s death.]Posted by Julie Young at October 6, 2003 04:13 PM
K... so I'm not going to comment on the Pope situation... it is probably better that way. But what is with the recent use of the word "fisking" on everyone's blogs? I tried to look it up, as one normally would when one doesn't know the meaning. But it isn't anywhere... help?
Posted by: Donna R. Hibbs at October 6, 2003 06:44 PMhmm. Interesting. I like the fact that you interjected your thoughts throughout the article, rather than making random lists of references at the end as a comment... I may have to try that :)
The fact that the article eludes to so many (what's the word?) taboos (I don't think that's it, but it'll have to do... brain cramp) really amused me. Should it be a problem that Pope John Paul II elected more cardinals than usual? Should it be an issue that only 6 were Italian? I'm a bit puzzled by the intentions of this author. Perhaps we are supposed to question the happenings in Vatican City?
I don't know about you, but I wouldn't question the Pope--and I'm note even Catholic. ;)
Posted by: KarissaKilgore at October 6, 2003 07:11 PMDonna - we had to "fisk" for homework, which essentially boils down to arguing with an article within the article.
Posted by: Julie at October 6, 2003 07:29 PMYay, now my vocabulary has a new word :-)
Posted by: Donna R. Hibbs at October 6, 2003 08:25 PM