Communicator/Opening Liturgy


The Communicator's article on Opening Liturgy in comparison to mine.

Communicator/Opening Liturgy

The Communicatorís article on the Opening Liturgy was more relevant because it focused more on the Liturgy itself while my article focused more on the reactions. The Communicator wrote about the crowd and the fact that class was cancelled so everyone could have the opportunity to attend. It also had a quote from Chaplain Fr. Stephen Honeygosky, while my article just had quotes from students (which made it more subjective).


Did reading the Communicator's article make you realize anything that you could have done differently that may have helped make your article better? I know when comparing the Setonian's article to mine, I kept saying, "I should have done that!"

Yeah. It made me wish I would have had a quote from a chaplain.

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