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September 26, 2005
Communicator/Opening Liturgy
The Communicator's article on Opening Liturgy in comparison to mine.
Communicator/Opening Liturgy
The Communicator’s article on the Opening Liturgy was more relevant because it focused more on the Liturgy itself while my article focused more on the reactions. The Communicator wrote about the crowd and the fact that class was cancelled so everyone could have the opportunity to attend. It also had a quote from Chaplain Fr. Stephen Honeygosky, while my article just had quotes from students (which made it more subjective).
Posted by Kayla Sawyer at September 26, 2005 9:53 PM
Comments
Did reading the Communicator's article make you realize anything that you could have done differently that may have helped make your article better? I know when comparing the Setonian's article to mine, I kept saying, "I should have done that!"
Posted by: Johanna at September 26, 2005 10:00 PM
Yeah. It made me wish I would have had a quote from a chaplain.
Posted by: Kayla Sawyer at September 26, 2005 10:38 PM