Oral Presentation Paper Reflection

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Oral Presentation Paper Reflection

Post-Peer Changes

It was said that I went off-topic and started comparing the level of comfort of Poncelet and Young Woman’s prison stay. The people in my group noted that neither of them had a pleasurable prison stay, so there wasn’t much point in including the tiny differences. That was deleted. I also changed the voice of that paper from past tense to present tense.

Although the people in my group appreciated my handout that used quotes to specifically compare Poncelet and Young Woman’s last words and execution, I wasn’t able to include it in the paper. It would have been too long and would have been way too many quotes. Instead, I decided to paraphrase the differences without textual evidence. This enabled me to maintain the specific details and save space.

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