Employment Application follow up

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Dear Sirs,

I'm very interested in the position at the daycare that you have available. If you feel that I may need some more experience, I have enrolled in an early childhood course at the University. These activities should give me the experience necessary that I may be lacking. I am presently taking an english class that will assist me with my writimg skills.

Thank You,

Marsha Banton


Good revision, Marsha. Everyone makes typos now and then, but when applying for almost any job, it helps to present yourself as a detail-oriented person who cares about first impressions.

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