March 3, 2004

Writing Recommendation Letters

Posted by Michael Arnzen at 10:22 in Praxis.

This morning I wrote a recommendation letter for a graduate student who is seeking a scholarship to help fund his studies. It was relatively easy for me to write -- not only because he's so good at what he does that singing his praises was simple, but also because I like to think I'm getting pretty good at writing these things. I even enjoy writing them, sometimes, because it is rejuvenating to be able to empower others who have earned it. After a good education, a good letter of endorsement is the best gift I can give a student who excels. And I pride myself on having success with them: almost every student I've recommended has gotten into graduate program, or received the award they deserved.

The thing is, no one ever taught me how to write them and it is rare for anyone in the profession to get formal training in the creation of this most important and powerful document. You sort of just pick it up by reading the genre and through practice. Luckily, in my past, my academic advisors kindly shared what they wrote about me with me, so I had a copy and I emulated them accordingly. Writing a number of them taught me the general formula for them, but I always write them from scratch, allowing my memories and my passion for the student's achievements to guide the composition. From reading these things in my service on hiring committees, I quickly learned that giving concrete examples of experiences is the most important element of a letter. So I do that with my students -- rather than just celebrating their achievements in abstract ways. Often, the reader of these things wants to judge for themselves a candidate's qualities; giving examples allows them to do so. I'll try to commit at least one paragraph to "narrating" an experience where the student impressed me most. If I have no memories of such an experience, I either refuse to write the letter or I write something very abstract -- and not too helpful, I imagine -- out of necessity.

When a student is desparate for a letter from me, and they're not a student I necessarily would have chosen to support in this way, I always give honest feedback, too. If a student had any major "issues" -- patterns of academic problems or issues that are still evident -- I feel it is my duty to report them and while I won't try to sink the student's career at all, I will invite a phone conversation if I feel that the student might be trouble. But I always find good things to say to at least give a balanced evaluation, letting the examples I select to include speak for themselves. (I'd give an example here, but I don't want to upset any students who might be reading). If students have acted aberrantly, I might include that information in an example. I know, too, that when a recommender writes a guarded review, that there are buzzwords and sly ways of allowing readers of these letters to read between the lines (there are parodic examples of this online). They can truly be forms of creative writing.

Although it's too late for the letter I wrote today, I just now did a little web searching to see what sort of advice is out there for writing these letters -- particularly when you want to do your best to get that student a job, an award, or a graduate program. I think the Derek Bok Center for Teaching and Learning at Harvard has the best overview of how to write rec letters (with lots of examples) and a general tipsheet that's also useful. (I also like the tipsheet at A2Z colleges). Michael Ernst earnest advice is quite sound. The examples at Michael Howell's "Winning Scholarships" page are generally good for writing employment letters and might be more appropriate for secondary education teachers. Monster.com -- the employment center of the web -- has some decent general advice for writing them, too.

Writing these things always gives me a moment to reflect. I always enjoy writing them. I've been teaching for something like 12 years now -- five years in my present position -- and as each year ticks by and more and more graduating seniors ask me to endorse them for jobs and graduate school apps. A handful of them come back to me asking for them again and again as they apply for new jobs or new programs, and I sometimes wonder: How many of these letters will I write in my lifetime? As earnest as I am about these students' talents, at what point do I cross the threshold and become a sort of "factory," mass producing them? A lot of requests generally come in at the same time of the year, in one big glob...and since I spend a lot of time composing or recomposing them, I wonder at what point does it become a workload issue? Since so much rides on their success, how much time is appropriate to dedicate to each one? And how many advisees will I have accumulated by the time I reach retirement? How many will "pay it forward," and go on to write their own letters some day?

I got an e-mail from a student I taught about ten years ago the other day -- after a stint in the theater, she's going into teaching. She told me she was partially inspired by my influence. A long term gain from teaching is seeing the impact you make on people's lives. And sometimes when you write these letters, they write back.

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Just the other day I e-mailed my former journalism teacher at U.Va. to tell him where I am now. And a few weeks ago, I e-mailed the director of a show that I worked on in high school, who helped me many years ago fill out a complex application for a receptionist/gofer job backstage at a national park for the performing arts. I got that job, which was the first one that moved me out of a kitchen. Both said they were very pleased to hear from me. I don't write letters of reference solely because I want students to praise me 15 years from now, but I'd agree... I'd like to hear back from more of the students to whom I give letters. But I remember deliberately NOT contacting former teachers and mentors when I was in a long transitional phase (that is, STILL not finished with my dissertation, STILL hunting for an academic job, etc.)

Posted by Dennis G. Jerz at 12:42 on March 3, 2004. #

Thanks for the links Mike. They'll come in handy when I have to write rec's for my students. I appreciate the time you take to do these. I understand the pressure of having to write a recommendation for a student who was not all that great as I've had to do it myself. I have also been given copies of many of the recommendations I've been given through the years. The best always mention those specific things that make the candidate good. I've seen many from collegues that are just form recommendations with the name changed, and perhaps altered just a bit.

Posted by Aaron Bennett at 12:50 on March 4, 2004. #

I am student finished for my ordinary national diplomaa and i want to go for my HND program and I want you to send a recommendation letter to be attached together with my HND form that will search more light on me positively. u ought to understand me better.

Posted by samson Olakunle at 12:47 on March 30, 2006. #

I am a student in this academic year i finished my studies but i got one opportunity in uk for research for that they need one recommendation letter from the professor who all are femeliar for me for this reason i need some assistance to write on letter of reommendation and send some sample to my mail adrees sir

Posted by S.RAJASEKARAN at 02:29 on May 19, 2006. #

Hi Mike!

Thanks for the great idea about including a specific narrative! I teach the same concept to my students in their first-year composition class, but never thought to use one myself.

I've been teaching at a mid-sized liberal arts college in the Northeast for 5 years now, and each term I am faced with having to be creative in writing a specific recommendation tailored to each student. I agree that many use a standard format, and then just change the student's name. I know the reader can see right through this tactic.

Have a great summer!

Posted by Susan at 12:17 on June 23, 2006. #

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