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We were so young when we met, just sixteen

Didn't know where I was going from there

Butterflies, shakes, first kisses, and dances

Reminders of those early days with him

Time went by, my heart grew fond, I felt trapped

Because he threw a curveball to my life

His attitude changed, I felt sad, confused

One summer we went away and love won

Every piece of suffering is old now

This love is real, eternal, and all mine

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"Because he threw a curveball to my life"
That line's in perfect blank verse form. Good job!
I like the punch these simple words convey.

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