Newswriting tips help with essay writing
"Often, slight rewording produces dramatic results" (7). I find this to be one of my problems in writing: I sometimes get too wordy, and use words that don't convey the meaning. Through the revision process, I am able to work on and fix this, but I would like it if at my first attempt this problem wasn't as prevalent. I completely agree with this statement though because many of the examples of "poor wording" didn't convey half of the meaning or significance that the revised sentence did.