maverick9825: ok so im in english and im having trouble putting thoughts onto paper
Sun and Storm: yuuup
maverick9825: im writing about this
maverick9825: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ROpmVabrBB8
Sun and Storm: the dreaded blockage.
Sun and Storm: OOO! my stud!
maverick9825: i have to write an appeal to the reason
maverick9825: appreal to emotion
maverick9825: and appeal to credibility
Sun and Storm: i LOVE this commercial.
maverick9825: yea me too
Sun and Storm: of the commercial?
maverick9825: yeah
maverick9825: we're learning about like rhetoric
Sun and Storm: what do you mean by an appeal?
maverick9825: like you as the viewer
maverick9825: appealing to this commercial
Sun and Storm: oh haha okay
maverick9825: like emotion passion for hockey
Sun and Storm: okay so tell me your thoughts so far
maverick9825: i dont know i hate doing this
maverick9825: well reason for appeal
Sun and Storm: HAHAHA nicholas come on lemme get it outta ya
maverick9825: the reason for the appeal for me is the talent that is being taken place
maverick9825: its sidney crosby
Sun and Storm: what's appealing about it--think about it... your audiences are going to be different. or is this just YOUR personal view?
Sun and Storm: okay so it's just about you.
maverick9825: i think
Sun and Storm: that's a good start. you can talk about how hard it is and how much practice it takes to be able to execute those kinds of shots
Sun and Storm: basically you want to expand on your reasons as much as possible
Sun and Storm: it's appealing because he's the essence of athleticism, you know?
Sun and Storm: is the paper concerned at all with what the ad is selling?
maverick9825: see this is why i ask you for help
Sun and Storm: all men, and even many athletes strive to be as good as sid
maverick9825: yeah
maverick9825: it just says appeal to reason
maverick9825: and then a bunch of blank spaces for me to write in
Sun and Storm: haha
Sun and Storm: think of the tagline too, i am what i am
Sun and Storm: the ad is telling the audience that it's brand can help you better your unique talents
maverick9825: yeah
Sun and Storm: so that's your reason... now what enforces that
Sun and Storm: he's wearing all reebok when he's doing the different activities in the commercial
Sun and Storm: weight lifting, off ice training, his uniform on the ice
maverick9825: yeah i think i got it now
maverick9825: i just went up there and asked her
Sun and Storm: HAHAHAHA
Sun and Storm: you're cute
maverick9825: i HAAAATE working in groups more than anything
Sun and Storm: oh is that what you're doing?
maverick9825: yeahh
Full Sail University gives each student a laptop. It comes in handy, haha.
