Nicholas is back to school.

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maverick9825: ok so im in english and im having trouble putting thoughts onto paper

Sun and Storm: yuuup

maverick9825: im writing about this

maverick9825: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ROpmVabrBB8

Sun and Storm: the dreaded blockage.

Sun and Storm: OOO! my stud!

maverick9825: i have to write an appeal to the reason

maverick9825: appreal to emotion

maverick9825: and appeal to credibility

Sun and Storm: i LOVE this commercial.

maverick9825: yea me too

Sun and Storm: of the commercial?

maverick9825: yeah

maverick9825: we're learning about like rhetoric

Sun and Storm: what do you mean by an appeal?

maverick9825: like you as the viewer

maverick9825: appealing to this commercial

Sun and Storm: oh haha okay

maverick9825: like emotion passion for hockey

Sun and Storm: okay so tell me your thoughts so far

maverick9825: i dont know i hate doing this

maverick9825: well reason for appeal

Sun and Storm: HAHAHA nicholas come on lemme get it outta ya

maverick9825: the reason for the appeal for me is the talent that is being taken place

maverick9825: its sidney crosby

Sun and Storm: what's appealing about it--think about it... your audiences are going to be different. or is this just YOUR personal view?

Sun and Storm: okay so it's just about you.

maverick9825: i think

Sun and Storm: that's a good start. you can talk about how hard it is and how much practice it takes to be able to execute those kinds of shots

Sun and Storm: basically you want to expand on your reasons as much as possible

Sun and Storm: it's appealing because he's the essence of athleticism, you know?

Sun and Storm: is the paper concerned at all with what the ad is selling?

maverick9825: see this is why i ask you for help

Sun and Storm: all men, and even many athletes strive to be as good as sid

maverick9825: yeah

maverick9825: it just says appeal to reason

maverick9825: and then a bunch of blank spaces for me to write in

Sun and Storm: haha

Sun and Storm: think of the tagline too, i am what i am

Sun and Storm: the ad is telling the audience that it's brand can help you better your unique talents

maverick9825: yeah

Sun and Storm: so that's your reason... now what enforces that

Sun and Storm: he's wearing all reebok when he's doing the different activities in the commercial

Sun and Storm: weight lifting, off ice training, his uniform on the ice

maverick9825: yeah i think i got it now

maverick9825: i just went up there and asked her

Sun and Storm: HAHAHAHA

Sun and Storm: you're cute

maverick9825: i HAAAATE working in groups more than anything

Sun and Storm
: oh is that what you're doing?

maverick9825: yeahh

Full Sail University gives each student a laptop. It comes in handy, haha.

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