From the sky comes the rain
From the rain comes the hate
From the hate come the disappointment
From the disappointment comes the anger
From the anger comes the saddness
From the saddness comes betrayal
Betrayal loses friends...
?! What spawned that one, Tiff?
Posted by: Karissa at March 27, 2004 10:31 AMI'll explain later...really long story, involving last minute changes and shady deals....
Tiff
Posted by: Tiffany at March 27, 2004 2:40 PMTiff,
I really enjoyed this poem. It sounds like what is going on in my life right now from losing friends during this year at SHU. It simple, sweet, and gets to the point. I can see each word drip off of the next word and then SPLATTER the final word, betrayal.
Posted by: Firefighter Chica at March 30, 2004 7:35 PMTiff, I love how you can put things into words, think you definatly defined how a few of us feel right at this time. I appreciate your ability to get out what you need to say. Your my hero! :)
Posted by: Sue at March 30, 2004 11:46 PM