Follow special instructions (TBA) on marking up your revision. Present your work orally, supply the class with a suggested prompt, and take notes on the ensuing discussion. (Revision 10pts; response 15pts)

Update: I've removed the presentation/prompt/discussion component of this exercise.

When you submit your final draft,

1. highlight every passage that differs from the draft you workshopped on Friday. If your poem is completely new, please add a note to that effect.
   
2. Add a note that addresses what you learned from the sonnet exercise.
   

This revision: 15pts (emphasizing changes since the version you workshopped on Friday).
Monday's Oral Presentation: 10pts.