Paper 1 Full Draft

If you have earned a 6 or above on your presubmission, then you may submit this assignment, which should be a major, significant revision of Exercise 1-1, 1-2, or 1-3.

Demonstrate that you can go beyond the specific suggestions that made, and come up with your own solutions to any problems I have identified. I won't have marked every proofreading error or wordy passage; I intend that you will look for such problems and correct them on your own.

Length: 4-5 pages.

Components:

I. Printouts
A) A printout of your rough draft (the original exercise you are submitting, with my comments)
B) Above that, a printout of your presubmission proposal (with my comments)

II. A single word processor file with 2 parts:
A) A highlighted copy of your full revision (with local changes highlighted in one color and global revisions highlighted in a different color).
B) A bulleted list that calls my attention to the most significant changes that you made.

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