February 29, 2004

More Haiku

Great friends are haikus
Few in number, profound, brief,
Lasting, Vice-versa...

Posted by Michael Diezmos at February 29, 2004 11:06 PM
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I don't know why people aren't doing haiku, it's fun, so much could be said in three lines 17 syllables...

Posted by: Mickey at February 29, 2004 11:20 PM

Great friends are not brief!
Giving strength to see the truth--
reflection of self

Great friends know you when
outside shatters reflection--
who you are shines through.

Posted by: lauren at March 2, 2004 3:38 PM

oops..please eliminate some of these, miguel (my computer froze)

Posted by: lauren at March 2, 2004 3:39 PM

One missed such keyword
Vice-versa, versa-vice, so
Lasting or brief...hmm?

Posted by: Mickey at March 4, 2004 2:41 PM

I give up for now
trying to understand you-
blissful ignorance

Elaboration
perhaps not confrontation-
nubious nuance

Posted by: lauren at March 4, 2004 11:15 PM

Friendships are haikus
Inspired dedication
of work-in-progress

Posted by: laur at March 4, 2004 11:24 PM

One thinks he knows Truth
Silent damsel knows Eve's fall.
Que sera sera.

Posted by: the peanut gallery at March 8, 2004 5:06 PM
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