Reflection #2: Obituary

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The theory of me and writing is I think I am in english class doing a research paper and need an over the limit amount of information. Thus making my news articles less ideal for a paper and more ideal for a English grade. After completing my obituary having it in length at approximately 840 words I sent it to google.docs.

Jessie Krehlick edited my article. She gave me very thoughtful information that made me anyalze my writing much better, and understand the key points to a news article.

My paper is now down to approx. 420 words rather than 840. I found this assistance to also inter chain with the Cappon Reading Chapter 4. It talked about lengths of sentences, what is key, and what to cut. I have started realiazing cutting down is a major rule.

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